Originally Posted by TuneMonger
There is a lot to like about this. It sounds authentic, very pro. But I felt like the song was yearning to break into a smoking chorus that never happened. I kept waiting for it, hoping for it, but to no avail. If not a chorus, some kind of musical change to make it more interesting. Not bad as is, just felt like it could've been so much more. Still a good effort, overall.
I agree; this song could have been better, as the main riff is a bit repetitive. That’s a good critique, and I think I need to learn to be more patient when structuring some of my songs.
laurent