Originally Posted by TuneMonger
This flowed really well for the most part (way to go, Andrew!!) and was delightfully nonsensical. For me, the lyrics had a teasing way of making the listener think that maybe there was something quirkily profound being related. Further, this song might've sat comfortably among the tracks of The White Album. Really good stuff!
I had a long journey with these lyrics. Originally I wrote a story with the idea of substituting each noun and verb with other random nouns and verbs. In the process, these pairs of lines came to me that had nothing to do with the original story. It’s easy to rhyme when there are no consequences! There was a bit of tweaking of this to smooth out the lyric flow.

White Album? My favourite of the Fab Four, and I love Savoy Truffle from that.

Originally Posted by rsdean
Well done! I think you accomplished what you set out to do. Great vocal that really keeps up with the esoteric lyrics. I agree with Rob - this would fit well on The White Album.
… and then there’s Sexy Sadie, Cry Baby Cry, Happiness is a Warm Gun, Martha My Dear … what an album!

Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
"Last Seen" means most recent post.
We’ve missed him also.
I wondered - his ‘last post’ was 25/12/25 (DDMMYY), so wondered if ‘last seen’ was a last login? I hope he’s okay.

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Great band indeed.
“Note: RT 2905 was ‘sliced and diced’ in certain sections to obtain the one bar fills in the choruses.”
Yes! comping up multiple re-gens is for us THE way to go to personalize a RT.
I think I’ll do more of this in future to dig out the gems.

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Nice performances by you …. vocals and guitar.
Thank you. I know I’m not a great singer or player, but as long as they illustrate my musical idea, I’m happy.

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The write? Well you more than adequately described it! smile
Love Tunemonger’s description: might be some quirkily profound.

Another fine mix and another one of your productions much enjoyed by us.
Thank you - I think I am learning new things with each new song - onwards and upwards!

Thank you all for listening and commenting!

Andrew

Regards,
Andrew D
Adelaide, Sth Aust
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