Hi James!
A very gentle song, and tastefully arranged. I like how you’ve brought in other instruments - just easing their way in, and not kicking the door down. It reminds me of the sort of song that Celine Dion would sing. I like your key shifts throughout the song - the last one is a little rough, but I like the idea of what you are doing there! That last key change - down - has the effect of making the singer even more gentle for a good soft landing. Well done!
Andrew