James,

Excellent tune . . . wonderful production job by Suno. It's a lovely write to boot, delivered just perfectly by the vocalist. Two small nits for me: I would have liked that third one to read " . . . my voice cracked" rather than "my voice did crack," which seems a bit too poetic and awkward phrasing. The other is simply what David mentioned at the 4:03 mark . . . not sure what happened to Suno there. You could try to regenerate that section of the song, or the whole song, then download the stems for each of the songs and do some mixing and matching to smooth it out. Sadly, just something you occasionally have to do with Suno.

But beyond those very, very minor (and not all that necessary) suggestions . . . this is a stellar tune. Just a beautiful write.

Deej

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