Thanks, Deej.

The "voice did crack" line had me thinking, too. Two reasons why I kept it: 1) I needed it to rhyme with "back", in the next line; and 2) I was hoping it would express acceptance more: "although, with tears, my voice did crack / your mind was made: no going back". I'm not sure "cracked" expresses that in the same way as the above, with an accent on "did". But yes ... it IS an awkward rhyme, it's just that I personally can't find a "better" one ... argh.

As for the Suno thing, I did not change back into D major, originally, so I had to transpose the final section down a whole tone, from the previous section's E major, in order to do so. Result: sound was affected. I actually tried the transposition in Suno Studio, hoping that that would not alter the sound unduly ... but no, it did ... argh. I'll see what I can do to make this transition and transposition more subtle ...

Thanks so much for stopping by, listening and commenting! Really grateful! smile