Hi Izzy!
I’m not one normally to listen to country (there are two styles of music I dislike: one is country and the other … etc.) BUT this song is very likeable! It’s enough to make me turn!
I love the doubled vocals when used, and your harmonies are gritty and very pleasing to listen to. I especially love the harmony on ‘You’ll remember my goodbye’. Some local pronunciations in your singing: darling, laughter, dancing, glass - you could almost be Adelaide-ian!
My ears are always tuned to hearing a minor iv and it pops up after ‘smile’ and in each verse - nice touch!
The Bridge piano ‘staccato’ playing adds a nice variation.
The lyrics - I hope are not a metaphor for you leaving the forum? I sincerely hope not.
Andrew