Hi James, a lovely melody and a beautiful voice. I know it is Suno, but still, I wish a had a singer like that. Than I would do the background vocals...
As I read, the melody is yours, or most of it? Normally Suno also gives a twist to the melody, but you have managed to avoid that?
I also liked the lyrics very much.

Nicely done!
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130