There's a whole lot to like here. The intro really drew my interest and the ending was very good. The chorus was a bona fide, beautiful bit of music. You really outdid yourself there! I can't say enough good things about that chorus. BIAB's piano solo really fit well into the arrangement. Prosody was fine, BTW. The verse was where things fell down a bit for me. It didn't ruin things, it just wasn't up to the rest of the piece. It was a bit unmusical. Fortunately your arrangement repeated the chorus a lot and downplayed the verse. Smart move! Overall, the verse issue really didn't detract very much from what I agree is one of your best efforts to date. I really enjoyed this. Well done!


Windows 11, Intel Core I5 10400, 16 gig ram, Scarlett 2i2, Sony Acid Music Studio 10, BIAB 2020 UltraPlus Pak