Well Jona,

That is a really cool song, a catchy rhythm and great vocals!
I also really like all those little background sounds, like the buzzing and shouting.

I wondered what the dynamics of the song would be like if you transposed it a chord higher after two-thirds of the song. Your voice can handle that. And what if you incorporated a guitar solo into it?

But these are just a few questions I would ask myself about my own songs as well. No, definitely not criticism, just curiosity.

Apart from that, it is simply a very beautiful song that you want to keep hearing endlessly.
So I put it on repeat.

Well done!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130