Originally Posted by musician17
Phenomenal lyrics: check.
Phenomenal vocals: check (that inflection on "darkness comes so gently you don't FEEL it" ... oh wow ...)
Phenomenal guitar playing: check.
Phenomenal songwriting: check.
Phenomenal mix (subtle, not overdone, letting the music breathe and communicate): check.

What is there to say? You are, whether you like it or not, a master. Bravo, bravo, bravo.

Very much appreciated, James....

Originally Posted by firesong
Floyd...paper and pen has been a refuge for probably everyone on this forum...I know it has been for me...you always seem to capture not just the words for your subject matter but the essence of it as well...I could talk about how well crafted this song is but for myself and other writers the "spirit" of it is enough to say..."so well done" ...Dan

Thanks, Dan...

Originally Posted by Finna
Great all the way around! I really enjoyed this a lot! smile

Thanks, Finna....

Originally Posted by Al-David
Hey Floyd ...

So nice to hear your music again. I've been away for about 6 months - really bad accident and out of country for a couple of months. But I'm doing much better. When I'm reminded of songwriting, your name is among the very first that crosses my mind.

A lot of us write songs - often pretty danged good. But you construct a song with precision and direction. You have an uncanny relationship with prosody. The vocal and lyric are always a perfect match. I wish I had that ability to the extent you do. There's good, excellent, elite ... and then Floyd Jane.

Nuff said. Besides, that about all I can type at the moment. My fingers aren't working real good.

Until next time... best to you & Deb.

Alan

Thanks, Alan....