Critter,

I also think this is a good first effort and I thought the vocal was good.


A couple of suggestions I would have would be; first that the piano seems too dominant throughout the song, try having another instrument be the backing focus when you start a different verse and maybe the piano shines more in the chorus. Second thing is I'd like to hear a different instrument when the solo goes to the bridge section.

These are JMHO's and meant constructively.

Sincerely,

Greg