Daniel,

I thought this was pretty cool. I listened to it several times.

The only critique I would have is the panning. I'd like to hear some of the supportive instruments panned more to the L & R, everything seems kinda pushed to the middle. Maybe pan the organ 50 or 60% R and the Rythm guitar 40 or 50% L, maybe the trumpet 5 or 10% either way (experiment with different extremes). I think it would add more separation to the instruments and maybe make it more spacious sounding. I would pretty much leave the bass & drums center.

JMHO

Nice Job,

Greg