Hey Josie

Thanks for the feedback - we were trying to make "train wreck" sound like the harmony-grouping of a real train whistle - still I guess it worked. Really glad to hear you grabbed the "jack" line - one of my favorites . . . .er, lines that is.

Harder/order just happened, we weren't even looking for a word to rhyme, it just popped in and we never questioned it - I'm very glad to hear that it's a comfortable fit.

Re photos - aw shucks ( foot scuffing in the dirt.)

It was great working out of three cities - thank God for Mario's and Greg's hearing.

In the chorus "turn off the light" I emailed them several times saying "I can't hear the "eff", it sounds like "on" - a couple of times. Return e-mails "Relax it's there". I don't use the phone well either.

Thanks for feedback Josie

Ian/Greg/Mario


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