Not really my cup of genre, but nice work and a very solid production.

A few highly subjective thoughts:

1. The fiddles on the introduction are weak. It sounds like you're trying to use background fiddles to play up front licks. Contrast that with the guitar break that you've got at 2:27. Why not use that break as the introduction?

2. The harmony at 2:00 and 3:42 sounds to me a bit sour. I think it's because you've got those scoops going, which sound great solo, but a bit harsh against a harmony part. Then again, it could be that I'm used to hearing everything autotuned to death.

3. You mix tenses throughout the song. After 0:37, why not keep everything in the present tense?

There's very little else to say, other than well done!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?