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my latest offering ,please feel free to comment


https://soundcloud.com/brad-stevens-uk/when-we-were-young-2



Title: WHEN WE WERE YOUNG
File:WHEN WE WERE YOUNG.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 85, Length (m:s)=3:26
No intro. 69 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 69. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,
Style is _GRVFLK2.STY (PopCountry Ballad w/ Busy Acoust)

RealTracks in style: ~700:Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotesPush Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 891:Piano, Acoustic, Solo-Accompaniment PopLiverpool Ev 065
RealTracks in style: 1945:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm GroovinFolk Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 2666:Pedal Steel, Rhythm LushChordsSlow Ev 075
RealTracks in song: 1760:Fiddle, Background Pop16ths Ev 085
RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^1-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride

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DONT WANNA DANCE ALONE ANYMORE TONIGHT
WANNA HOLD YOU IN MY ARMS
SAFE TILL MORNING LIGHT
AND KISS YOU LIKE I DID
WHEN WE WERE YOUNG

DONT WANNA FEEL
ANY OF THOSE TEARDROPS FALL
WANNA HEAR YOU SAY THAT IM THE ONE
JUST LIKE YOU DID
WHEN WE WERE YOUNG


WHEN WERE YOUNG THE WORLD TURNED SLOW
MORE GIVE THAN TAKE IN THAT ERA SO
MORE PEACE AND I LOVE YOU'S
WHEN WE WERE YOUNG
THOUGHT WEVE NEVER GROW OLD
NOW YOU DONT LIKE THE COLD SO
REMEMBER WHEN WE WERE YOUNG


DONT WANNA CRY ABOUT THE CHILDREN GONE
WANNA WAKE UP HERE WHERE WE BELONG
JUST LIKE WE THOUGHT WE WOULD
WHEN WE WERE YOUNG

DONT WANNA SEE THAT TIME HAS FLOWN SO FAST
WANNA SLOW DOWN THE SAND IN THAT GLASS
WHERE DID IT ALL GO
WHEN WE WERE YOUNG


WHEN WERE YOUNG THE WORLD TURNED SLOW
MORE GIVE THAN TAKE IN THAT ERA SO
MORE PEACE AND I LOVE YOU'S
WHEN WE WERE YOUNG
SAID WEVE NEVER GROW OLD
NOW YOU DONT LIKE THE COLD WIND
SO REMEMBER WHEN WE WERE YOUNG

DONT WANNA EVER HAVE TO SAY GOODBYE
TO THE ONE I LOVED ALL MY LIFE
WANNA WAIT FOR YOU AT THOSE GATES
WHEN MY TIME COMES


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What a tender but sad song. I think you did a really great job on this one and I enjoyed your use of the RealTracks.


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WOW This is one great song that most all of us old pharts can relate! I loved the lyrics and your vocals. Your backing tracks were spot on.

To nitpick I thought that you have too much echo on those harmonies and that made it hard to understand the words. I would cut way back on them but, as always, this is just my opinion and others may or may not agree.

Regardless this is an excellent song.


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Very cool tune Brad. Super vocal and backtrack. Lyric was excellent. Well done


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Originally Posted By: MarioD
WOW This is one great song that most all of us old pharts can relate! I loved the lyrics and your vocals. Your backing tracks were spot on.

To nitpick I thought that you have too much echo on those harmonies and that made it hard to understand the words. I would cut way back on them but, as always, this is just my opinion and others may or may not agree.

Regardless this is an excellent song.


Agree with Mario on everything. Super song, great hook, great arrangement but the vocals may be a bit overproduced for the intimate style and lyric. Really, really nice job!! Take care. Greg

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I had exactly the same thoughts as Mario. Great write, excellent singing, nice production. smile

But... the echo on the voice made a lot of the lyrics unintelligible, which is a shame because you've got some awesome lyrics there. cry


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Enjoyed this, so obviously sincerely heart-felt. Agree with the constructive comments above. I liked the more tender vocal style on the last verse. Excellent addition to the forum!

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Nice song and yea most can relate too.

Vocals do need a wee clean up.

Easy done tho.

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What a tune! Very sincere and heart felt, and I'm loving the old school country vibes here. Your vocal performance is top notch, and a wonderful throwback to the country music of the 70's. That aside, the subject matter is very relatable and your vocal delivery only lends merit to that.

Great work on this one, and thanks for sharing smile


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I enjoyed this very much, especially the harmony.

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Thanks for the comments and feed back guys, I really appreciate it
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