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#529980 - 03/24/19 05:36 AM [User Showcase] Your Kiss
Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 153 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities ChicagoBob Apprentice Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 153 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities	This is the latest song I finished. This song is about me and when I met the women that eventually became my wife. That kiss changed everything..... Your Kiss BIAB RealTracks included RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~364:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~368:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 1593:Fiddle, Background Pop16ths Ev 065 RealTracks in song: 2691:Guitar, Electric, Soloist CountryBalladBrentSimple Ev 085 RealTracks in song: 1167:Guitar, Electric, Soloist RockBalladBrent Ev 065 RealDrums in Style: NashvilleEven16^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride Lyrics: Your Kiss Changed Everything Verse (1) I stopped believing in love It’s like some fool just made it up I built my walls as tall as heaven Didn’t think I needed anyone Chorus But I found you in my darkest place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything Verse (2) We kissed for hours in my truck Until that morning sun came up You were everything I wanted It took one look and I was in love Chorus But I found you in my darkest place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything Bridge: Against all odds Against all my fears You healed my heart You dried my tears Chorus But I found you in my darkest place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything © 2019 Robert M Poznanovich, BMI Edited by Andrew - PG Music (01/25/21 10:37 PM)
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#529987 - 03/24/19 07:11 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 5191 Loc: North Carolina David Snyder Veteran Registered: 08/29/14 Posts: 5191 Loc: North Carolina	Really great vocals on this Bob. I thoroughly enjoyed this. _________________________ David Snyder Audiophile Everything + Studio + Instruments + Fingers ASCAP, NSAI www.davidsnydermusic.com www.reverbnation.com/davidpsnyder www.soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel www.songtradr.com/user/profile/david.snyder
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#529994 - 03/24/19 09:52 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 09/02/18 Posts: 1232 Loc: Virginia USA Ezekiel's Storm Expert Registered: 09/02/18 Posts: 1232 Loc: Virginia USA	Wow! You crafted a nice melody. Vocal is fantastic. Thanks. I enjoyed this.
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#530029 - 03/24/19 06:20 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 12/08/11 Posts: 5674 Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada Scott C Veteran Registered: 12/08/11 Posts: 5674 Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada	Excellent vocal. Very pretty backtrack. I imagined your wife loved this song as well. Well done. _________________________ Scott Collingwood https://soundcloud.com/scottt709 https://soundcloud.com/spiritlevel-ca
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#530089 - 03/25/19 09:02 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 06/16/00 Posts: 1944 Loc: Texas Jim Expert Registered: 06/16/00 Posts: 1944 Loc: Texas	Great lyrics, melody, vocals, feeling, & performance... Very Garth Brookish type of country style... It should fit nicely in his repertoire as well in yours... Good job... I like it! _________________________ Jim †=☮&♥
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#530110 - 03/25/19 10:28 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 12/29/12 Posts: 5480 Loc: Originally Missouri ... Now Al... Al-David Veteran Registered: 12/29/12 Posts: 5480 Loc: Originally Missouri ... Now Al...	Verse (1) "I stopped believing in love It’s like some fool just made it up I built my walls as tall as heaven Didn’t think I needed anyone" So simple yet says so much. I think that's some really terrific writing. And the rest of the lyric is right there, too. Your vocal sits so perfectly in this song. Your vocal reminds me a little bit of Richie McDonald. Actually it reminds me of him quite a bit. Loved it! One thing for consideration ... perhaps let that distortion guitar have a louder voice on its short solo. But man, this is just so good! best to you ... Alan _________________________ BIAB 2018 Ultra Plus-all StylePaksWin108GB DDR4I5-6th GenAT 2035 MicPeavey Nashville 112 AmpIbanez ART120 Electric/Washburn D200S Acoustic*Stromberg Monterey Jazz Guitar Loops: https://aldavidmusic.wixsite.com/bestmusicloops
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#530111 - 03/25/19 10:40 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 153 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities ChicagoBob Apprentice Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 153 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities	Thanks Alan for the feedback and advice on the mix. Being deaf in one ear makes mixing a challenge particularly when panning . I will adjust the volume— very much appreciated.
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#530212 - 03/26/19 01:23 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 04/13/16 Posts: 2895 Loc: Stanwell Park NSW Australia rayc Veteran Registered: 04/13/16 Posts: 2895 Loc: Stanwell Park NSW Australia	Originally Posted By: Bob P Being deaf in one ear makes mixing a challenge particularly when panning. Well, listen like Brian and mix in mono - it can sound as good as stereo and often more powerful. Seriously - the stereo mix is pretty good given your circumstance BUT if you centre everything and get your levels right (remember to do the same with any stereo effects), I think this song would shine as brightly. In the mastering stage a good ME will sprinkle a little magic dust with delay/reverb to give it THAT feel. Edited by rayc (03/26/19 01:23 AM) _________________________ Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe Pop on over to The Recording Rebels for positive, honest commentary, critiques and support. https://therecordingrebels.com
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#530245 - 03/26/19 06:38 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 05/22/11 Posts: 3477 Loc: Florida tommyad Veteran Registered: 05/22/11 Posts: 3477 Loc: Florida	Oh yeah! Way to go. This is the best I’ve heard from you. Well written, great vocal and melody and very well produced. I enjoyed it very much, Tom
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#530260 - 03/26/19 07:22 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 02/15/17 Posts: 3414 Deryk - PG Music PG Music Staff Registered: 02/15/17 Posts: 3414	Wow - what a tune! You did a remarkable job here. You can tell it's from the heart, and your vocals are outstanding. It flows beautifully, and is truly a touching tribute. You should be really proud of your work on this one - thanks so much for sharing _________________________ Cheers, Deryk
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#530334 - 03/26/19 06:22 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: tommyad]
Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 153 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities ChicagoBob Apprentice Registered: 09/28/14 Posts: 153 Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities	Originally Posted By: tommyad Oh yeah! Way to go. This is the best I’ve heard from you. Well written, great vocal and melody and very well produced. I enjoyed it very much, Tom Thanks TOM for the feedback
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#530392 - 03/27/19 08:17 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 11/29/06 Posts: 2160 Loc: Finland jannesan Veteran Registered: 11/29/06 Posts: 2160 Loc: Finland	Always touching to read personal backstory behind a song, brings another dimension for the lyrics, I had a tear in my eye already in the chorus. Great story, beautiful melody, emotional vocal delivery. That solo guitar might sound better with bit more breadth and reverb. Janne _________________________ Hear My Music: Soundcloud YouTube
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#530399 - 03/27/19 09:02 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 01/18/16 Posts: 1664 Joe -PG Music PG Music Staff Registered: 01/18/16 Posts: 1664	Hey Bob, wowzers! The arrangement is a pleasure to listen to and I dig the overall timbres. Adding the fiddle to this is a nice touch. Very captivating lyrics. Thanks for sharing! _________________________ Cheers, Joe
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#530519 - 03/28/19 04:58 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 11/30/07 Posts: 3720 Loc: Ontario, Canada BlueAttitude Veteran Registered: 11/30/07 Posts: 3720 Loc: Ontario, Canada	Excellent song! Wonderful, heart felt lyrics and vocals. Mix sounds great to me. Actually everything sounds great, well done! _________________________ Dave Blue Attitude Website Blue Attitude YouTube channel
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#530591 - 03/28/19 12:32 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 12/05/11 Posts: 10175 Loc: GA USA Janice & Bud Veteran Registered: 12/05/11 Posts: 10175 Loc: GA USA	"But I found you in my darkest place When I thought there was no way I could ever love You stole my heart, you were a thief that I needed Oh I’ll never be the same Cause your kiss changed everything" Wow! This is a great song and that chorus is so strong. No need to parse it out...all is good. Back for another listen.... J&B _________________________ J&B Soundcloud J&B YouTube J&B Website
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#530593 - 03/28/19 12:48 PM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 08/10/12 Posts: 9156 Loc: Florida floyd jane Veteran Registered: 08/10/12 Posts: 9156 Loc: Florida	Nice song, Bob. Nicely produced. The acoustic guitars and piano sound especially good - crisp, clean, clear. Good mix throughout. fj _________________________ 150+ Songs produced using BIAB RealTracks And 50 more... and some more...
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#531040 - 04/01/19 10:37 AM [User Showcase] Re: Your Kiss [Re: ChicagoBob]
Registered: 12/21/13 Posts: 6222 Loc: Davis, CA Greg Johnson Veteran Registered: 12/21/13 Posts: 6222 Loc: Davis, CA	Really nice Bob!! Very pretty music and a wonderful passionate vocal. Everything is so well done here!! Take care. Greg
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