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#545129 - 07/12/19 08:15 AM
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Just going for something whimsical.  https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs2/cinnamon-treeI am enjoying my journey through the 2019 Real Sets. Got stuck at 317 "Guitar and Piano for Songwriters." I was shooting for a simple sound and purity in the mix on this one--used the Waves Abbey Road TG Mastering Plugin (love it) on Instrument Bus and Drum bus, with final polish in Ozone. CINNAMON TREE V1 Adam and Eve In the garden of Eden Walked near a Cinnamon Tree Adam said Eve Now look what we’ve done I guess we’ll have to live free Eve said to Adam Just take my hand Cause I’m just a woman And you’re just a man We’ll drive ‘cross this earth Find our own promised land Cause we’re doing the best that we can CH So they rolled down the windows Held hands in the dark Drove ‘cross the world With a wide open heart They made love in the meadows And slept by the sea And kissed ‘neath a cinnamon tree Yeah they kissed ‘neath a cinnamon tree a cinnamon tree CH Now there’s lovers from Asheville And Asbury Park Searching for faith But it’s a shot in the dark Cause you are what you are And it’s all you can be When you know that you have to live free CH So let's roll down the windows Hold hands in the dark Drive ‘cross the world With a wide open heart Make love in the meadows And sleep by the sea Just like Adam and Eve We’ll kiss ‘neath that cinnamon tree Inst. Chorus All Words and Music Copyright David Snyder 2019 ASCAP/Day of Faith Records Performed by David Snyder Style is _SINNER.STY (Sinner 6-8 Folk) RealTracks in style: 533:Bass, Electric, 12-8 Crystal Sw 065 RealTracks in style: 3055:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm Folky68Mike Sw 050 RealTracks in style: 3054:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm Folky68Brent Sw 050 RealTracks in style: 2876:Fiddle, Background AmericanaSlow128Andy Sw 040 RealDrums [in style:AmericanaSlow128^02-a:Kick Snare, b:Ride Snare
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#545155 - 07/12/19 10:07 AM
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Re: Cinnamon Tree
[Re: David Snyder]
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This is a clever idea for a song. I wish I woulda thunk it. Lyrics and music flow nicely from verse to chorus--I especially like the change in the last chorus. It gives a completion to the song.
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#545168 - 07/12/19 11:48 AM
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Re: Cinnamon Tree
[Re: David Snyder]
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Nicely done...
Extremely creative lyrics that flow very well throughout the song...
Enjoyed the listen to your creativity.
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#545171 - 07/12/19 11:59 AM
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Nice job. I like the tracks you used.... nice and full but simple.
Channeling Dylan again.... ?
I like it.
Sounds like you're starting to get your vocals dialed in a bit.
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#545197 - 07/12/19 02:13 PM
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Re: Cinnamon Tree
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Very nicely done, David Loving the lyrics on this. They are really unique, clever, and definitely memorable. That aside, your vocals are top notch as always and the chorus is nice and powerful. Definitely picking up the Dylan influence on this one, which is never a bad thing by me. Great work, and thanks for sharing!
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#545200 - 07/12/19 02:37 PM
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Re: Cinnamon Tree
[Re: David Snyder]
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Man oh man, what a fascinating write!
Great performance and very nice "band" you put together.
And the fine mix iced it all!
Enjoyed the listens!
J&B
PS Love in the intro
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#545207 - 07/12/19 02:54 PM
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David
Excellent work on this, one of your best vocals and a strong set of lyrics.
It was also immediately engaging and nicely familiar.
Very well done.
Peter
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#545219 - 07/12/19 05:51 PM
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David,
From Eden to Asbury Park with a sweet message and rolling music... had me swaying.
Really enjoyed the lyrics and everything on vocals/backing/mix sounds just right.
Very good!
Robert
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#545229 - 07/12/19 06:35 PM
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Issuing a different Cinnamon Challenge.
The vocal intro gave an impression of impending strut R.O.C.K. nice touch to confound expectations.
Really enjoyable narrative.
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rayc
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#545251 - 07/12/19 11:50 PM
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Had a hankering for something simple. A well-writ little song with some big ideas tucked into the twang and that time sig. Very satisfying.
As a side note: I'm glad they didn't make love in a Cinnabon in the airport waiting for a flight between Asheville and Asbury Park. They's people tryin' to eat.
Edited by Tangmo (07/12/19 11:52 PM)
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#545266 - 07/13/19 03:42 AM
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Re: Cinnamon Tree
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Hi David,
It's been a while since you posted a song, but man, this was worth the wait! Great intro, excellent writing, and possibly your best vocal yet.
People have mentioned Dylan, I'm hearing some Springsteen vibes happening also.
Very, very good!
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#545300 - 07/13/19 07:19 AM
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Re: Cinnamon Tree
[Re: David Snyder]
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Good one, David.
Everything works. Good band. Good write. Nice mix.
A good flow to the listen...
fj
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#545334 - 07/13/19 11:48 AM
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Hi David!! Good to see you back!! Really like this.....has a great rhythmic drive and some wonderfully creative DS lyrics!! I have a question. The style is SINNER. I was curious if you just liked "the band" in the PG demo, and that word was the trigger for this creative tune. Kind of a shot in the dark but then again: Is there really such thing as coincidence? Really nice work David!! Take care. Greg
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#545351 - 07/13/19 03:39 PM
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Fantastic as always David! The vocals harmonize well with the other instruments. Great work!
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#545388 - 07/13/19 09:23 PM
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I agree with everyone. Clever write. Fun song. Style is _SINNER.STYHrm... I don't seem to have that one on my list.  I guess you take inspiration from wherever you find it!
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#545398 - 07/14/19 12:24 AM
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[Re: David Snyder]
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Love how the stately and measured pacing of the instruments couple with the the spirited and emotive lyrics and vocals on this track.
Well done, David!
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#545408 - 07/14/19 04:24 AM
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Agree. Well done, David. A thought provoking lyric, too, with respect to living free.
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#545486 - 07/14/19 03:35 PM
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Thanks Ezekiel, Glad you liked it man!
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#545487 - 07/14/19 03:35 PM
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#545488 - 07/14/19 03:36 PM
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Thanks Herb! Always channeling Bob. Never turn it off.
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