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#575689 - 01/12/20 11:22 AM [User Showcase] Dangerous
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floyd jane Offline
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A little Country Swamp Rock.

And another dangerous woman...



DANGEROUS

everyone said she was trouble
you really need to leave it alone
call it a day walk away
some sins can't be atoned
she'll take you down so deep
you'll never make it back
word is the devil tried
and even that boy cracked
the girl is dangerous

   cross that line
   you'll leave behind
   your heart, your mind, your soul
   it's a long hard fall
   she'll take it all
   and you'll lose all control
   you got it bad
   any chance you had
   long ago was lost
   the girl is dangerous

i thought i could handle
anything she threw my way
little did i know
the tricks that girl could play
those emerald eyes
that hypnotize
an intoxicating kiss
aiming every whisper at my heart
she never seemed to miss
the girl is dangerous

   cross that line
   you'll leave behind
   your heart, your mind, your soul
   it's a long hard fall
   she'll take it all
   and you'll lose all control
   you got it bad
   any chance you had
   long ago was lost
   the girl is dangerous

   i crossed that line
   left behind
   my heart, my mind, my soul
   a long hard fall
   she took it all
   and i lost all control
   i got it bad
   any chance i had
   long ago was lost
   the line's been crossed
   the girl is dangerous



The BAND:
RealTracks in song: 1522:Bass, Electric, PopPower8s Ev 120
RealTracks in song: 1418:Bass, Electric, SouthernRock Ev16 085
RealTracks in song: 2444:Guitar, Baritone Electric, Background PopCountryBrent Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 3159:Guitar, Baritone Electric, Rhythm AmericanaSlow16thsBrentFX Ev16 060
RealTracks in song: 1000:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockLAFuzzyHeld Ev 120
RealTracks in song: 806:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm DrivingCountryBalladDirty Ev 065
RealTracks in song: 2585:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PunkHeldPlus Ev 165
RealTracks in song: 1684:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopPromiseCrispHeld Ev16 100
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As always, comments welcome.
Have at it.


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#575706 - 01/12/20 01:21 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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This sounds like a real classic.
Every thing hits the mark.
What else is there to expect from a talented
musician.
Rob4580

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#575707 - 01/12/20 01:40 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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P Glaser Offline
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Well written song, sir. Great production!
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#575720 - 01/12/20 02:14 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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floyd

Superb use of Band In A Box and Loops (assume drums -anything else?) to create an amazing cohesive sound.

Great song (as expected) loved the style & powerful vocals.

Love to know how you put that one together!

Truly excellent!

Peter

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#575746 - 01/12/20 03:27 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Loved this Floyd. Super vocal lyric. Backtrack was perfect. Loved your mix and production

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#575766 - 01/12/20 04:48 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Well now!
That's some damn good work.
Great production from top to bottom.

Something about dangerous women, ain't there.
I've got one on that subject I'll post some day.
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#575773 - 01/12/20 05:05 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Floyd, your use of the realtracks in this tune are the best I can remember listening to since I've been around here! You must have spent a tremendous amount of time sorting these out! I can't hear ANYTHING that sounds "off" in any way! It's such a clean production and everything falls into place perfectly! If PG Music doesn't use this as a promo tool for their product, they are really missing a great opportunity as far as I'm concerned! Thanks, Torrey
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#575780 - 01/12/20 05:31 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Wow! This is as good as it gets! My new favorite of yours (and that's saying a lot!)

Great use of RT's and loops. Your vocals are as good as ever. Particularly like your bgv's. Very well done!

Great write!

Steve
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#575783 - 01/12/20 05:37 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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dcuny Offline
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Love the intro - it set up the song and hooks me right away.

Super fun listen - well sung, interesting instrument parts, catchy rhymes, cool harmony. Sounds a bit like an extended theme song for television show.

Man, you've got a hot band there! (And the singer's not bad either laugh ).


Edited by dcuny (01/13/20 07:13 PM)
Edit Reason: Ma -> Man
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#575820 - 01/13/20 01:57 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Loc: Surrey,England
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Hi Floyd,

As a big fan of guys like CCR, Tony Joe White, Redbone and many others, this hit me right between the pick-ups. I loved it. And I love it when I play a song that has me turning the volume up to 10 right away. smile

Your vocal slides over the lyrics like molasses on a hot day, every nuance perfectly fits each line. And the production is awesome. Great job.

Keep 'em coming Swamp Thing! smile

All the best

Martin
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#575822 - 01/13/20 02:12 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Loc: Melbourne, Australia
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Up there with your best, Floyd.

Band members really did justice to your delivery.

Lyrics are top class.
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#575839 - 01/13/20 03:54 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Hi floyd,

Now *this* is my type of country, something with a little attitude! Sort of a Steve Earle vibe happening.

Great intro! And those drums! Love the kick, snare too; great groove and sitting in the mix loud and proud.

Nice job mixing the guitars, the way you have them panned sounds fabulous through the phones; a little conversation happening there between them.

Good idea using two different bass realtracks! It's never crossed my mind to do that, but it works a treat to give the chorus a distinct feel.

And of course love your vocal and writing:

"she'll take you down so deep
you'll never make it back
word is the devil tried
and even that boy cracked
the girl is dangerous"

Nice!

Great start to 2020!

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#575858 - 01/13/20 07:04 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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What a tune - love the vocals on this. Perfectly written, and delightfully catchy. Top notch work on the mixing job too. I wouldn't bat an eyelash if I heard this on the radio.

Thanks for sharing!
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#575908 - 01/13/20 11:36 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: P Glaser]
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Originally Posted By: Rob4580
This sounds like a real classic.
Every thing hits the mark.
What else is there to expect from a talented
musician.
Rob4580


Thanks, Rob...


Originally Posted By: P Glaser
Well written song, sir. Great production!


Very nice of you to stop by, Paul... Thanks!

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#575910 - 01/13/20 11:44 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Holy cow, Floyd! To paraphrase the late George Jones, "We heard there was a fast train, coming out of Florida."
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#575987 - 01/13/20 06:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: PeterF]
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Originally Posted By: PeterF
floyd

Superb use of Band In A Box and Loops (assume drums -anything else?) to create an amazing cohesive sound.

Great song (as expected) loved the style & powerful vocals.

Love to know how you put that one together!

Truly excellent!

Peter


Thanks, Peter. The drums are loops. And the banjo and some guitars.

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#576066 - 01/14/20 10:07 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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Robertkc Offline
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Floyd,
An amazingly tight band on a cool edgy song that`s still so darn catchy.
The use of loops and editing nuance is nothing short of benchmark use of the software...
I`d love to see you make another video on your process ( heck, this is good enough PG Music might want to think about a contractual arrangement for sharing the wisdom!).
Loved it.

Robert

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#576068 - 01/14/20 10:32 AM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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I guess we have all met one smile...
Superb production, vocals, & lyrics...

Your tunes are always superb...
But I really enjoyed this one!
★★★★★
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#576141 - 01/14/20 05:05 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: P Glaser]
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I'd never guess these were RTs and loops, amazing! Some sins can't be atoned, great line. Sounds like a hit song to me, once you add those superb vocals. Running out of superlatives over here.
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#576144 - 01/14/20 05:49 PM [User Showcase] Re: Dangerous [Re: floyd jane]
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An FJ classic.
You've wrangled the loops & RTs superbly.
What stands out, for me, is the vocal recording.
It sounds pristine but I'm sure you've done some work on the tracks.
Any tricks n tips re vocal tracking & treatment you'd care to offer the world?
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