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Will I Remember Tomorrow?

No story. No glory. Just a song.

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RT408 Guitar, Resonator, Background Allis
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I used a few royalty-free loops in the soundscape at the end.


Lyrics:

It’s a long way to Monday without you
White walls and wailing, I won’t make it through

Is there any love left that I could borrow?
I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow?

Night watered breezes tangled through your hair
Who’s running their fingers when I’m not there

Is there any love left that I could borrow?
I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow?

Morphine kisses
Stitches with misses
Infectious calumny
Lay your hands on me

Your jazzy rhythm walk keeps repeating
Last night I felt my heart stop its beating

Is there any love left that I could borrow?
I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow?

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"No story. No glory. Just a song." No, just a masterpiece!

I really liked this song. You vocal, harmonies, instrumentation, lyrics and mix are all top shelf. My toe was tapping from the git go.

This is definitely a winner that you should be very proud of.


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Hi, this one is First Class!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Could easily fit right in to a movie soundtrack. Please get this song out there for the world to enjoy...everyone has been in this moment at one time or another.

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I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow? is a very evocative line. No story? So I get to invent one with clues from your song? Cool!

Loved the changes. Those sus4ths are nearly always in my toolbox...such a nice "reaching" quality to them. Now, tell me there aren't any and I'll slink away embarrassed.

Band and voice are in top form. I really enjoyed this.


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The harmonies are ace and lift the excellent song beyond the present...very late 60s coolness.


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Hi Ezekiel,

This is a very good song, with strong (but sometimes difficult to translate)lyrics.
The way your song is composed makes it works out hypnotic 9in a way) and especially intriguing.
I like that in a song.

Have a nice day,
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A really nice production. Build well.

Cool vocals. The harmonies sound so tight I'd guess they were generated?? - really well done (live? melodyne? BIAB?) - nice.

A lyric that really keeps the ear and the mind engaged.

There is an interesting 60's vibe to this that cannot be pinned down - folk stuff like Peter, Paul & Mary or even The Mamas and the Papas...with some Lemmon Pipers and Strawberry Alarm Clock mixed in...

Well done.

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Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm

I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow?


That line and this "Night watered breezes tangled through your hair
Who’s running their fingers when I’m not there". You're good with words Ezekiel's Storm, but I only have one. WOW!


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Really love how this song builds.
Wonderful job you have done on this.
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Maybe the best I've heard from you with intriguing lyrics and your always good vocals. And a great ending to boot. Nice work!!


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Sometimes "just a song" is just as powerful! I think you did an especially good job on the vocals. They really helped set the tone.

Thanks for sharing!


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Mario, Notebynote, Ray, Hans, Floyd, Marty, Rob, Tunemonger, Ember:

Thanks so much for listening to my little song and for posting such positive comments.

Tangmo:

Your ears are correct. I was tooling around with the chorus first (Bb6, Abmaj7, Cmaj7, Cm7, G, Gsus4), then decided to write the verses around a sort of drone of G, Gsus4 repeating. Thanks for your feedback.

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Really nice feel to this one. I like it a lot.
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Loved it. A more "serious" song if that makes sense ... where the vocals and, of course, the writing (for me) are what "steal the show". Great job.

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One of the first things that really impressed me was the chord progressions.

The lyric phrasing is superb.

All of this absolutely complemented with perfect vocal delivery.

Yes, a masterpiece.


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Ezekiel's Storm,
Arrangement is very (Very!) strong. Definitely not "just" a song. It would take me years to write something complex like this smile Vocals & production is pro level. Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing.

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I enjoyed the smooth chording, the sweet sounding band and your silky voice. Beautiful lyrical images. Nicely flowing build up to the excellent psychedelic ending.

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A really excellent song, great feel and top notch vocals.

Superb stuff.

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I have to write brief thanks to you guys. Grading and lesson has been eating up my time more than a WalMart shopper on free hot dog Sunday.

Leon, Musician 17, Video Track, Misha, Janne, Peter:

I appreciate your comments. You are much too kind. As for my vocals, digital tech makes me sound better than I am. However, I think I sound best when I'm hearing me in my head, but then on the recording, I think WTF, I ain't putting that out there! smirk

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one- Two - and - three - and - Four - and - Drawed me right in and the next thing I knew I was locked in....Time flies when you're having fun. very nice job.

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