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Will I Remember Tomorrow? No story. No glory. Just a song. Real Tracks: RT1119 Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Strumming RT543 Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Dreamy RT408 Guitar, Resonator, Background Allis RT1267 Synth Pad, PopShining RT2667 Pedal Steel, Background DreamySingleNote RT2266 Synth, BellPad, Rhythm 80sPopMelodic RT3458 Bass, Electric, AmericanaPop8thsSteve RealDrums-PopAmerican I used a few royalty-free loops in the soundscape at the end. Lyrics: It’s a long way to Monday without you White walls and wailing, I won’t make it through Is there any love left that I could borrow? I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow? Night watered breezes tangled through your hair Who’s running their fingers when I’m not there Is there any love left that I could borrow? I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow? Morphine kisses Stitches with misses Infectious calumny Lay your hands on me Your jazzy rhythm walk keeps repeating Last night I felt my heart stop its beating Is there any love left that I could borrow? I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow?
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"No story. No glory. Just a song." No, just a masterpiece!
I really liked this song. You vocal, harmonies, instrumentation, lyrics and mix are all top shelf. My toe was tapping from the git go.
This is definitely a winner that you should be very proud of.
Seated at the restaurant, He "Darling can you say something that makes my heart beat faster"?
She "Your wife just walked in"!
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Hi, this one is First Class!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Could easily fit right in to a movie soundtrack. Please get this song out there for the world to enjoy...everyone has been in this moment at one time or another.
Respectfully,
Notebynote
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I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow? is a very evocative line. No story? So I get to invent one with clues from your song? Cool!
Loved the changes. Those sus4ths are nearly always in my toolbox...such a nice "reaching" quality to them. Now, tell me there aren't any and I'll slink away embarrassed.
Band and voice are in top form. I really enjoyed this.
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The harmonies are ace and lift the excellent song beyond the present...very late 60s coolness.
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Hi Ezekiel,
This is a very good song, with strong (but sometimes difficult to translate)lyrics.
The way your song is composed makes it works out hypnotic 9in a way) and especially intriguing.
I like that in a song.
Have a nice day,
Hans
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A really nice production. Build well.
Cool vocals. The harmonies sound so tight I'd guess they were generated?? - really well done (live? melodyne? BIAB?) - nice.
A lyric that really keeps the ear and the mind engaged.
There is an interesting 60's vibe to this that cannot be pinned down - folk stuff like Peter, Paul & Mary or even The Mamas and the Papas...with some Lemmon Pipers and Strawberry Alarm Clock mixed in...
Well done.
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I won’t forget you; will I remember tomorrow?
That line and this "Night watered breezes tangled through your hair Who’s running their fingers when I’m not there". You're good with words Ezekiel's Storm, but I only have one. WOW!
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Really love how this song builds.
Wonderful job you have done on this.
Rob4580
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Maybe the best I've heard from you with intriguing lyrics and your always good vocals. And a great ending to boot. Nice work!!
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Sometimes "just a song" is just as powerful! I think you did an especially good job on the vocals. They really helped set the tone.
Thanks for sharing!
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Ember
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Mario, Notebynote, Ray, Hans, Floyd, Marty, Rob, Tunemonger, Ember:
Thanks so much for listening to my little song and for posting such positive comments.
Tangmo:
Your ears are correct. I was tooling around with the chorus first (Bb6, Abmaj7, Cmaj7, Cm7, G, Gsus4), then decided to write the verses around a sort of drone of G, Gsus4 repeating. Thanks for your feedback.
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Really nice feel to this one. I like it a lot.
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Leon
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Loved it. A more "serious" song if that makes sense ... where the vocals and, of course, the writing (for me) are what "steal the show". Great job.
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One of the first things that really impressed me was the chord progressions.
The lyric phrasing is superb.
All of this absolutely complemented with perfect vocal delivery.
Yes, a masterpiece.
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Ezekiel's Storm, Arrangement is very (Very!) strong. Definitely not "just" a song. It would take me years to write something complex like this  Vocals & production is pro level. Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing. Misha.
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I enjoyed the smooth chording, the sweet sounding band and your silky voice. Beautiful lyrical images. Nicely flowing build up to the excellent psychedelic ending.
Janne
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A really excellent song, great feel and top notch vocals.
Superb stuff.
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I have to write brief thanks to you guys. Grading and lesson has been eating up my time more than a WalMart shopper on free hot dog Sunday. Leon, Musician 17, Video Track, Misha, Janne, Peter:I appreciate your comments. You are much too kind. As for my vocals, digital tech makes me sound better than I am. However, I think I sound best when I'm hearing me in my head, but then on the recording, I think WTF, I ain't putting that out there! 
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one- Two - and - three - and - Four - and - Drawed me right in and the next thing I knew I was locked in....Time flies when you're having fun. very nice job.
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