|
|
|
|
#597724 - 05/16/20 01:25 PM
[User Showcase]
Good Ol' Girl
|
|
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
|
It would seem that while Tom & Janice were writing their "strong good ol' girl" song, I was writing one, too... small world. There are plenty of good-ol-boy songs. So, a little balancing... This one's a Country Boogie Blues Rock Shuffle  GOOD OL' GIRL she ain't one to sit idly by while the good ol' boys talk trash and she ain't sittin' shotgun with her feet up on your dash she slides in behind the wheel says "buckle up boy 'casue this girl's gonna show you fast" she ain't one for daisy dukes she wears wrangers with a crease her boots aren't covered in rainbows and flowers it's all scuffs, red clay and grease her pony tail pulled through a mossy oak cap a look that says "i do what i please" while good ol' boys party by the river she does her own thing so you'll have to forgive her she knows just who she is she's a good ol' girl fair warning this good ol' girl's gonna rule your world if you're looking for dainty and fragile forget about looking here she ain't satin or crinoline and lace it's all camo and vintage john deere don't let her hear you say a word against willie keep your hands off her fishing gear she'll take carolina barbecue any day over french cuisine buddy save that rose for your mama she's partial to jim beam some think she's a nightmare but she's living the dream while good ol' boys party by the river she does her own thing so you'll have to forgive her she knows just who she is she's a good ol' girl fair warning this good ol' girl's gonna rule your world The BAND: RealTracks in song: 420:Bass, Electric, Blues Sw 120 RealTracks in song: ~957:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryBoogieGrittyMuted Sw 110 RealTracks in song: 2728:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm BluesShuffleMike Sw 130 Royalty Free Loops Me: vocals, harmonies, electric fills/leads/solos Comments welcome. Hope you enjoy it. fj
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597726 - 05/16/20 02:02 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 12/27/03
Posts: 15247
Loc: Hamlin NY
Veteran
Registered: 12/27/03
Posts: 15247
Loc: Hamlin NY
|
WOW, This is fantastic!
You have a wonderful way with words! "she ain't one for daisy dukes she wears wrangers with a crease
her boots aren't covered in rainbows and flowers
it's all scuffs, red clay and grease" You just gotta love lyrics like that!
Super groove, great vocal and lyrics all mix professionally then you throw is some very tasty guitar and you have a winner!
This is a winner!
_________________________
I'm the best man at my buddy's second wedding. Is it appropriate to open my dinner speech with "Welcome back Everyone"?
64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB and RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software and some hardware.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597744 - 05/16/20 03:51 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 06/09/16
Posts: 3054
Veteran
Registered: 06/09/16
Posts: 3054
|
Floyd,
Wow, maybe I missed other songs you played lead on, but the intro knocked me back to listen again; that and the fills throughout sound so good.
My favourite lines from an excellent write:
"it's all camo and vintage john deere
don't let her hear you say a word against willie
keep your hands off her fishing gear"
All the boxes are ticked - this is another corker of a tune, as they say where I`m from.
Robert
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597778 - 05/16/20 07:13 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 12/29/12
Posts: 5480
Loc: Originally Missouri ... Now Al...
Veteran
Registered: 12/29/12
Posts: 5480
Loc: Originally Missouri ... Now Al...
|
Hey Floyd ...
You one good old songwriter, too! But please, no pics of you in Daisy Dukes! Has a Travis Tritt vibe to it. First time, I think I've heard you play your own lead. You should do it more often! Still can't stop my foot from tapping and the song's been over for several minutes.
This has a thick layer of "really good" drenched all over it!
Bets to you & yours. Be safe ...
Alan
_________________________
BIAB 2018 Ultra Plus-all StylePaks*Win10*8GB DDR4*I5-6th Gen*AT 2035 Mic*Peavey Nashville 112 Amp*Ibanez ART120 Electric/Washburn D200S Acoustic*Stromberg Monterey Jazz Guitar Loops: https://aldavidmusic.wixsite.com/bestmusicloops
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597784 - 05/16/20 11:44 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 05/05/18
Posts: 1067
Loc: United Kingdom
Expert
Registered: 05/05/18
Posts: 1067
Loc: United Kingdom
|
This is very, very, very good - which is par for the course from you :-) What makes this sound great, as opposed to "just" good, are the lyrics - at least in my view. Superb word painting. The arrangement and playing is great, the voice is wonderful as per usual - the lyrics make it fantastic. Well done.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597799 - 05/17/20 02:28 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 11/30/07
Posts: 3717
Loc: Ontario, Canada
Veteran
Registered: 11/30/07
Posts: 3717
Loc: Ontario, Canada
|
Well, you had my attention just from reading the song description before I hit play: "Country Boogie Blues Rock Shuffle"  I thought, man, that would be like me doing a traditional country song  But you nailed it; Great song, great groove, fun and well written lyrics. And, you have been holding out in the guitar department! I had no idea you could play electric leads. Nicely done, I especially like what you did for the intro. Love your vocal in this one! Very strong, especially during the chorus. Nice stops in the chorus! Drums sound awesome too. Yeah! Well done, floyd
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597806 - 05/17/20 03:07 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 04/07/13
Posts: 6214
Loc: South Carolina
Veteran
Registered: 04/07/13
Posts: 6214
Loc: South Carolina
|
Another stellar (or maybe Stella for this one, I know two Stella's, both Kuntry Gurls ) write, arrangement and performance. While that great guitar performance and tone draws well deserved attention, your care in handling the vocal dynamics is outstanding on this song and caught my ear. I really like this song and will be coming back to listen some more.
_________________________
BIAB Ultra Pak+ 2021:RB 2021, Latest builds: Dell AIO; Windows-10-64 bit, AMD A9 Processor and 16 GB Ram Memory.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597827 - 05/17/20 05:12 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 09/30/16
Posts: 998
Loc: Netherlands, Haarlem
Expert
Registered: 09/30/16
Posts: 998
Loc: Netherlands, Haarlem
|
Hi Floyd,
A nice Boogie Woogie you made here!
You can feel Corona is comming to an end, or at least lets all hope it does.
Than there can be parties where the band plays this kind of moody songs.
I liked how you sing the chorusses. Bright and very relaxed!
A good song, Floyd!
Hans
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597886 - 05/17/20 10:37 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: MarioD]
|
|
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
|
WOW, This is fantastic!
You have a wonderful way with words! "she ain't one for daisy dukes she wears wrangers with a crease
her boots aren't covered in rainbows and flowers
it's all scuffs, red clay and grease" You just gotta love lyrics like that!
Super groove, great vocal and lyrics all mix professionally then you throw is some very tasty guitar and you have a winner!
This is a winner!
Thanks, Mario! It is always nice to have someone quote their favorite lyrics... and thanks for all the fine comments!!
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597895 - 05/17/20 10:49 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 12/08/11
Posts: 5673
Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada
Veteran
Registered: 12/08/11
Posts: 5673
Loc: Edmonton, Ab, Canada
|
What a cool backtrack Floyd. This one makes you want to get out of your chair. Loved the guitar tone. Real bite. Another super vocal and lyric. Well done...
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597921 - 05/17/20 03:50 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 12/06/03
Posts: 4087
Loc: Sydney Australia
Veteran
Registered: 12/06/03
Posts: 4087
Loc: Sydney Australia
|
floyd
A nice bluesy number with your usual panache. Enjoyed the lyric, the addition of your guitar, and the impassioned vocal performance.
An excellent addition to your catalogue.
Peter
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597937 - 05/17/20 06:06 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 11/20/17
Posts: 213
Loc: United States
Apprentice
Registered: 11/20/17
Posts: 213
Loc: United States
|
Man, I really enjoyed that. What a great song, I'm still hearing it in my head!!
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597982 - 05/18/20 07:49 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: Robertkc]
|
|
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
|
Floyd,
Wow, maybe I missed other songs you played lead on, but the intro knocked me back to listen again; that and the fills throughout sound so good.
My favourite lines from an excellent write:
"it's all camo and vintage john deere
don't let her hear you say a word against willie
keep your hands off her fishing gear"
All the boxes are ticked - this is another corker of a tune, as they say where I`m from.
Robert Thanks, Robert. I played some fills on one of Janice & Bud's songs... But this is the first time I've played any extended leads on anything...
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#597983 - 05/18/20 08:00 AM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 06/05/12
Posts: 12681
Loc: Melbourne, Australia
Veteran
Registered: 06/05/12
Posts: 12681
Loc: Melbourne, Australia
|
Lots of fantastic comments need to be bestowed on you for this extraordinary delivery.
This is absolutely full of Wow Factor
Knockout lyrics, and sensational vocal delivery.
"she ain't satin or crinoline and lace
it's all camo and vintage john deere"
How good is that!
_________________________
BIAB & RB2021(Audiophile), SonarPlatinum, Izotope Prod.Bundle, Roland RD-1000, Synthogy Ivory, Kontakt, Focusrite 18i20, KetronSD2, NS40M StudioMonitors, Pioneer Active Monitors, AKG K271 Studio H'phones
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#598049 - 05/18/20 06:24 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: Al-David]
|
|
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
Veteran
Registered: 08/10/12
Posts: 9156
Loc: Florida
|
Hey Floyd ...
You one good old songwriter, too! But please, no pics of you in Daisy Dukes! Has a Travis Tritt vibe to it. First time, I think I've heard you play your own lead. You should do it more often! Still can't stop my foot from tapping and the song's been over for several minutes.
This has a thick layer of "really good" drenched all over it!
Bets to you & yours. Be safe ...
Alan Thanks, Alan... and not to worry about those Daisy Dukes....
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#598052 - 05/18/20 07:08 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 03/07/18
Posts: 2686
Veteran
Registered: 03/07/18
Posts: 2686
|
FJ, Very cool rocker! Loved lyrics and phrasing on this. Delivery is super strong. Excellent write. Guitars worked really well, loud, but not over the edge. You probably had a blast recording this Thank you for sharing! Misha.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#598055 - 05/18/20 07:39 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 06/05/12
Posts: 710
Journeyman
Registered: 06/05/12
Posts: 710
|
Very good. Nice idea. Great music. Well written lyrics. I like it.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#598056 - 05/18/20 07:46 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 05/18/20
Posts: 1
Newbie
Registered: 05/18/20
Posts: 1
|
A nice bluesy number with your usual panache. Enjoyed the lyric, the addition of your guitar, and the impassioned vocal performance.
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#598069 - 05/18/20 09:32 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 04/23/18
Posts: 981
Loc: Mill Valley, California USA
Expert
Registered: 04/23/18
Posts: 981
Loc: Mill Valley, California USA
|
Floyd,
Great vibe right out of the gate—foot-tapping, head-rocking. I think this is among your best vocals, e.g., the way you drag out “fast” in the last line of the first verse. All the stops are right on time. Great lyrics—paints a perfect picture of just who this “good ol’ girl” is. Top to bottom—stellar, stellar, stellar. Outstanding work!
My humble regards,
Deej
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#598077 - 05/18/20 11:48 PM
[User Showcase]
Re: Good Ol' Girl
[Re: floyd jane]
|
|
Registered: 12/29/12
Posts: 5480
Loc: Originally Missouri ... Now Al...
Veteran
Registered: 12/29/12
Posts: 5480
Loc: Originally Missouri ... Now Al...
|
Floyd ...
Just took another listen Wanted to say this reminded me of a B&D-type song with Kix on the lead vocal. Works for me! Now, waiting for your next great song ...
Alan
_________________________
BIAB 2018 Ultra Plus-all StylePaks*Win10*8GB DDR4*I5-6th Gen*AT 2035 Mic*Peavey Nashville 112 Amp*Ibanez ART120 Electric/Washburn D200S Acoustic*Stromberg Monterey Jazz Guitar Loops: https://aldavidmusic.wixsite.com/bestmusicloops
|
|
Top
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
New Update Available for Band-in-a-Box® 2021 for Windows!
Update your Band-in-a-Box® 2021 today!
We've applied some updates to a variety of Add-ons, improved transcriptions and simple tags, resolved playback issues with MIDI tracks, and more. Plus, this free update adds the latest DAW Plugin 3.46!
Learn more & download now.
Band-in-a-Box® 2021 Polish for Windows is Here!
Efektem naszej ciężkiej pracy w ostatnim czasie jest m.in. dodanie 80 nowych funkcji i wspaniałej kolekcji nowych dodatków i zawartości, które obejmują 202 RealTracks, nowe RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Studia Instrumentalne, Wykonania Artystów, dodatkowe RealDrums "Pojedyncze ", transkrypcje RealDrums, pakiet MultiStyles PAK 1, Pakiet Xtra Styles PAK 10 i wiele innych!
Nowych | Pakiety
Band-in-a-Box® 2021 Dutch for Windows is Here!
We zijn bezig geweest en hebben 80 nieuwe functies toegevoegd en een verbazingwekkende collectie van nieuwe inhoud, inclusief 202 RealTracks, nieuwe RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumentale Studies, Artiest Uitvoeringen, Bonus RealDrums "Singles", RealDrums transcripties, MultiStyles PAK 1, Xtra Stijlen PAK 10 en meer!
Nieuwe Functies | Pakketten
Band-in-a-Box® 2021 Danish for Windows is Here!
Vi har haft travlt, og har tilføjet 80 nye funktioner og en fantastisk samling af nyt indhold, bl.a. 202 RealTracks, nye RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, Artist Performances, bonus RealDrums "Singles," RealDrums transsriptioner, MultiStyles PAK 1, Xtra Styles PAK 10 og meget mere!
Hvan er Nyt | Pakker
Band-in-a-Box® 2021 for Windows Update Available!
Band-in-a-Box® 2021 Swedish for Windows is Here!
Vi har varit flitiga och lagt till över 80 nya funktioner och en fantastisk samling av nytt innehåll, innefattande 202 RealTracks, nya RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, Artist Performances, Bonus RealDrums "Singles," RealDrums transcriptions, MultiStyles PAK 1, Xtra Styles PAK 10, med mera!
Paket | Vad är nytt
Update Your RealBand 2021 Today!
The latest version of RealBand 2021 is ready to download and add to your existing 2021 installation!
With this update we've addressed many user reported issues. We brought back the option to save mono WMA files, made Band-in-a-Box notation slurs visible in RealBand notation, decreased the frequency of warning messages about sampling rates, added program stability when selecting FlexASIO driver, and more!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
34247 Members
67 Forums
69111 Topics
593550 Posts
Max Online: 2537 @ 01/19/20 07:09 AM
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Previous Topic
Index
Dansk
Deutsch - Windows
Español
Français - Windows
Italiano - Windows
Nederlands
Polski
Português
Svenskt
русский
Japanese
Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese
Korean