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#659546 - 06/08/21 07:01 AM
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** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
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Registered: 12/10/08
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** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
Keep the World Outside our Bedroom Door
I used various mix of Band in Box; Drums, Bass, and live Guitars; Lead, Rock Power Chords. I wanted a stadium rock feel.
Let me know what you think.
REVERB NATION
https://www.reverbnation.com/kaynemusic/song/32693110-bedroom-door
SOUNDCLOUD
https://soundcloud.com/ekayne/bedroom-door
Edited by Elliott Kayne (06/09/21 10:13 AM)
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#659611 - 06/08/21 03:40 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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I enjoyed this, nicely done.
Great use of the band.
Rob4580
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#659620 - 06/08/21 04:38 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Interesting creation.
A nice rock feel.
I like the message in the lyrics.....well delivered.
moto
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#659630 - 06/08/21 05:50 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Sounds really great Elliot.
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#659640 - 06/08/21 06:55 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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This is great. Can you please give us some details about which style and tracks (etc.) you used? Thanks in advance. Very nicely done.
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#659666 - 06/09/21 02:46 AM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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This has a great live feel. Love how the drums hit in the first part, how'd you do that? The song and the singing are both very good. The vocal might need a little mix magic to sit better. I could be wrong about that. Overall, it was quite impressive!
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#659702 - 06/09/21 08:11 AM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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I really like the build up with the drums and guitar. Great melody as well.
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#659720 - 06/09/21 09:57 AM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Thanks for listening and I appreciate your comments, compliments and feedback.
Here's the BIAB Tracks used:
****** Song Summary *************
Title: bedroom door
File:bedroom door2.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 110, Length (m:s)=3:53
No intro. 103 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 103. Repeat x1 chorus
Melody has 1592 notes, Melody harmony is < no harmony >(0)
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,
Style is _SHINING.STY (Praise & Worship Pop Shining)
RealTracks in song: 1254:Bass, Electric, PopShiningSync Ev 120
RealTracks in song: 1257:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopShiningRock8ths Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 1256:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopShiningGritty Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 1259:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopShiningRockA-B Ev 120
RealTracks in song: 693:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming AcRockBright Ev 120 (B:eighths)
RealDrums [in Song:RockHardModernEv8^2-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Open HiHat
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#659721 - 06/09/21 10:06 AM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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This song has come a long way from the BIAB tracks.
DRUMS:
Besides the BIAB drum parts I used EZ DRUMMER for the opening drum hits, to get that big 70's stadium sound. I manually played via midi keyboard added ride cymbals at various points throughout the song.
GUITARS
I use REASON as my DAW and it has A-List Electric Guitarist plug-in for some of the chucking guitars and power chords. I also added me playing LIVE Guitar PRS 513 and Boss ME-80 direct. I am also playing Lead Guitars with Strat / ME-80 direct. I sweetened the Lead Guitar lines with Midi Strings playing the same lines so it sounds bigger.
PIANO
I am playing Midi Keys. All midi parts are bounced down to Audio in my DAW (Reason) to save CPU and allow editing, and audio effects.
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#659722 - 06/09/21 10:07 AM
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[Re: TuneMonger]
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I remixed based on your suggestions... thanks
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#659761 - 06/09/21 03:47 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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A mix of Bon Jovi & Terry Jacks with a country narrative.
The tail on the intro drum reverb on the left was REALLLY long.
With the reverb etc there's some de-essing to be done.
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#659776 - 06/09/21 04:50 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Love the drums and the guitars.
Good vocals. Keyboard solo fits nicely.
Big 80s rock sound.
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#659834 - 06/10/21 05:09 AM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Hi Elliott,
I can adjust with most of the comments; a good song with a nice build up and cool drum intro.
And the vocals sounded very good. Maybe you could bring in a little more emotion further on in the song? (although, behind the bedroom doors there is a lot of emotion going on, I presume).
But I enjoyed listening,
Hans
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#659837 - 06/10/21 05:33 AM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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What a great build to this passionate rocker, Elliott. Excellent vocal, and the band is perfect. Thanks for sharing the details. Man, those drums are the perfect addition.
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#660079 - 06/11/21 04:27 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Excellent production on this tune Elliot. Super vocal and backtrack. Well done
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#660457 - 06/14/21 05:03 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Very cool song!! Love the build and the payoff!! Your vocal is so well recorded and processed!!!.....sounds completely pro to me!! Well done all around!! Take care. Greg
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#660464 - 06/14/21 05:23 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Greg Johnson]
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What a great intro and climax. Your dynamics were fantastic. Outstanding vocal and lyrics that were mixed perfectly.
This sounds pro and is ready for air time IMHO.
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#660480 - 06/14/21 06:44 PM
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Re: ** New Rock Song - Bedroom Door **
[Re: Elliott Kayne]
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Hi Elliott,
What a great song - I loved the whole lot.
What's going on here - 3 good songs in one day!
What I really like is all the different sections of the song and tremendous light and shade. A lot of the songs on this forum have a good idea but they tend to be one trick ponies. I am also guilty in this in some of my songs.
In particular:
Opening - dramatic and tremendous energy.
Verses starting at 48 seconds - great change of pace.
Refrain at 2:06 - perfect
Second refrain at 3:06 - even better.
Back to the verses at 3:22 - this is how to end a song.
Vocals - I liked your talking/singing style - perfect for this song. A couple of notes in the first half of the song at ends of phrases are a touch peaky. But I think you can easily fix these with a few cut and pastes from later in the song. It is worth it for such a good song.
Let's hear more.
Best Regards
Nigel
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