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Hi all, Here's another collaboration with David Lekich. I hope you will enjoy this song. https://soundcloud.com/christian-devienne/im-too-aloneDown on my luck again When will this darkness end Oh, I can use a friend I feel so lonely Would you be of the mind To spend a little time With me and maybe be My one and only I’m too alone I’m too alone Set aside like a Dog without a bone I’m too alone I’m too alone Won’t you open up your heart And take me home It’s not my style you see To beg so desperately But you’re the one I need I know this surely If you could take the time To get to know me, I’m Certain you would quickly see You’re the one for me I guess it’s hard for you To want to trust me like I do you It’s been so long since someone’s song Has ever sung to me like you do RD SkaSlowClassicWes^1 RT 916 Acoustic Bass RT 3660 Acoustic Guitar RT 2549 Fiddle RT 594 Fiddle RT 3699 Solo Acoustic Guitar RT 1690 Piano
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Hello Chris and David Excellent song Very nice melody and very good background track The singing of David raises the song again on another level The voice is just top class A very good collaboration with a very very good song result Both thumbs up Many greetings Andi ;-)
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Hi, you two. I think this has a good melody and well mixed but there is a "sameness" all the way through that could do with some attention. Maybe a break before the chorus and a few accents here and there.
The last line here sounds awkward: "But you’re the one I need I know this surely". Maybe a change to something like "come set my spirit free".
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Hi, Chris & Deej. A wonderful collab. The melody grabs me right away. Excellent close harmony on the choruses, and I really like the harmony separation in the the verses. Perfect instrumentation and a good mix.
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Quite fast tempo for such a sad song, but it has a really catchy melody. David interprets deep and dark sadness very emotionally once again, nice doubling. Very nice chord progression. I enjoyed the instrumentation and especially the fiddle solo, although it could have been longer.
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Hi Chris and David,
Very good song and really good vocals. The two of you blend very well together.
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Good Pop write. Good vocals. Good mix.
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I like it! ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif) The guitar solo worked well, and the vocals and harmony are good. The drum hits were cool, too.
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Good song, great vocals (no surprise there), production seemed fine to my inexpert ear. Fine work, gents.
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Beautiful. It's got that melancholy French chanson sound that I absolutely adore. Deej is so blooming versatile, it's wow. Congratulations to both.
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Chris & Deej
Very entertaining and easy to listen to.
Nice melody, well sung and arranged.
Very nice.
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Cool collab with an excellent melody and band.
Nice harmony and unison bits.
The entire vibe is very engaging!
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Well done! An unusual up beat approach to a lonely message.
It worked for me. Nice band and great vocals by Deej
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Thank you all for your kind comments. ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
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