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#738470 - 11/13/22 02:40 PM [User Showcase] Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone
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Guess it’s been a minute or so since I’ve been here. So here’s one.

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Uh Oh Oh No She’s Gone


Woke up at six AM

still dark outside

Make my way from our bed to the kitchen

while I rub my eyes

Turn to see if she’e still there

And then I see her empty chair



She said that she’d be leaving

one day I’d be on my own

Now every time I start to say us

I remember I’m alone

When I roll on down the road

It seems like she’s riding along

Then It hits me

Uh oh Oh no She’s gone



Looking down two cups in the sink

I may never be the same

I had my chances to make things right

But they slipped right down the drain

Turn to see if she’e still there

And then I see her empty chair


©2022 Thomas Adams




Edited by tommyad (11/13/22 05:53 PM)

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#738478 - 11/13/22 03:53 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Super song

Great backing track and guitar chops

I think your vocal should be a little louder but again that is just my opinion.
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#738488 - 11/13/22 05:04 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Great guitars and vox, this sounds radio ready to me. Returning to the forum in a formidable fashion!
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#738548 - 11/14/22 08:21 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Tom,

Killer sound. Every instrument stands loud and proud.
I'm always blown away by the acoustic guitar sound you get.
Your electric sounds perfect.
Drums and Bass are superb.
I think the vocals are at just the right level.

A nice "she's gone" write. (the sink/drain thing is clever)

Gorgeous mix.

Great to have ya back!

fj

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#738567 - 11/14/22 09:53 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Great melody, arrangement and mix!
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#738572 - 11/14/22 11:01 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Balance sounds good to me, Tom.
I like the guitar riff too.
My only sugg is that it's crying out for a short chorus after the second verse.
Just a simple repeat of "Uh Oh Oh No ..." would do it.

Vic

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#738575 - 11/14/22 11:56 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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I like it: very good song with great vocals, a great arrangement and a really good mix.

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#738590 - 11/14/22 01:09 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Sounds good Tommy!

Nice, rich, punchy, radio-type sound.

Great work.

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#738592 - 11/14/22 01:17 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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An enjoyable listen man. Great vocals, strong lyrics, great band.
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#738687 - 11/15/22 09:14 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: MarioD]
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Originally Posted By: MarioD
Super song

Great backing track and guitar chops

I think your vocal should be a little louder but again that is just my opinion.

Hey Mario, Thanks for checking in. You are 100% spot on on the vocal volume. I kicked it up quite a bit. I got in a hurry and didn't give it time to settle in. Now I hear a few things I could have done better. Oh well, next time I will slow down. Thanks for your nice comments, Tom

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#738783 - 11/15/22 07:27 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: TuneMonger]
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Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Great guitars and vox, this sounds radio ready to me. Returning to the forum in a formidable fashion!
Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to listen, Tom

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#738808 - 11/16/22 03:59 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Hi Tom,

Great to hear a new one from you, it's been way too long!

Totally pro sound from you as always.

Love the riff! And great sound from the guitars overall.

Superb song from start to finish, loved it.

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#738814 - 11/16/22 04:30 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Tom,

A very pleasant song to listen to, regardless of the subject of the lyrics.
Your vocals are very good here, like the band.
I liked how the bass cuts through the song. Did Marty helped you on this one?

I enjoyed it very much. I played it again 2 more times. Now it stays in my head for a long time!

Hans
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#738865 - 11/16/22 07:18 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Wow, very luscious sound, great arrangement and mix. Very pleasant vocals, I especially like the "Then it hits me..." part. Maybe bit too upbeat for a love lost song, but that is just my melancholy mood wanting to hear the song end with a minor chord smile

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#738984 - 11/16/22 02:14 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Good to hear from you Tommy. Super vocal and lyric. Loved the sound of your guitar. Really well done..

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#739000 - 11/16/22 02:58 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Tom,
Its no surprise this is a pro-level sounding production; excellent energy on your vocal and the band is fantastic... signatures of your many great songs posted here.
I hope there`s more coming; this is a very good!

Robert

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#739017 - 11/16/22 03:46 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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I assume that's you on the guitar for the fills n trills. They really make the song complete,(though may be a little loud in the chorus).
The harmonies are ace.
There's a bit of a brittle build around 3.5kHz particularly when the sustained chords are behind the vocal.
Terrific song, terrific performances too.
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#739031 - 11/16/22 04:16 PM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Hi Tom ...

What a cool country sound!

Even though your voice is much different from Richie McDonald's, I get somewhat of a Lone Star vibe from this. David Lee Murphy also comes to mind. I love the full, robust bass line. For me, everything about this says 1995 country at its best. Some contemporary nasmes could also push thisd yup the charts. But, no matter the other namnes, I doubt it would sound as good this.

Good to hear from ya!

Alan
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#739125 - 11/17/22 05:03 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: floyd jane]
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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Tom,

Killer sound. Every instrument stands loud and proud.
I'm always blown away by the acoustic guitar sound you get.
Your electric sounds perfect.
Drums and Bass are superb.
I think the vocals are at just the right level.

A nice "she's gone" write. (the sink/drain thing is clever)

Gorgeous mix.

Great to have ya back!

fj
I’m sure I mentioned this before. Logic has a built in effect that spreads acoustic guitar really wide. I add a little eq and use it on every song. You know I love those signature licks. Copy and paste is your friend. You only got to get it right one time! Same goes with repeating choruses and harmonies. Thanks for all your words of support. They mean a lot, Tom

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#739134 - 11/17/22 05:16 AM [User Showcase] Re: Uh Oh Oh No She's Gone [Re: tommyad]
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Yep, you were missed, Tom. Man, this software is gold in your hands. Your guitars really top the bill, and the story lyrics are just perfect. Harmonies are so good.
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