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Another tune with my new lyricist and songwriting partner Rachel Cintula, who recently joined my Nashville Songwriters group. I had a title and chorus only and sent it to her. She sent back the rest of it about five minutes later and asked me if that is what I was looking for. Not kidding. She has also added about 50 songs to our dropbox. Going to be a busy year. Her lyrics took me to a place I had not expected with the music. Love the New BIAB country stuff. Church Girlsby Rachel Cintula and David Snyder https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/church-girlsCHURCH GIRLS By Rachel Cintula and David Snyder V1 My buddy’s been chasing girls all around Getting his heart caught up in every bar in town But when the fun dries up he gets let down I said son, You need to find you one with the Holy Ghost So find you a girl who’s heaven bound Fill a pew and listen for that heavenly sound Ah, church girls love having a sinner around So go ahead and let her save your soul CH And I love church girls It’s amazing how they walk I love church girls Cause they giggle when they talk And I love church girls You know I do Oh, God you know it’s true I love church girls Yeah, I love church girls V2 Cause she knows her Lord wore thorns for a crown Her eyes on the cross, her feet on the ground With a kind of love that always abounds A church girl can make your life whole So find you a girl who’s heaven bound Fill a pew and listen for that heavenly sound Ah, church girls love having a sinner around So go ahead and let her save your soul CH Oh I love church girls It’s amazing how they walk And I love church girls Cause they giggle when they talk And I love church girls You know I do Oh, God you know it’s true I love church girls I love church girls BR And the preacher said Hell can’t get any hotter I said I don’t know preach I just met your daughter CH And I love church girls It’s amazing how they walk I love church girls They giggle when they talk And I love church girls You know I do Oh, God you know it’s true I love church girls I love church girls I love church girls All music and lyrics copyright 2023 by Rachel Cintula and David Snyder David Snyder: Lead and backing vocals, arrangement, instrumentation, mixing and mastering RealTracks in style: 3467:Bass, Electric, AmericanaSyncSteveAB Ev16 085 RealTracks in style: 2906:Piano, ElectricVintage, Rhythm BluesyPopMike Ev 100 RealTracks in style: 794:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModernCountrySync Ev 100 RealTracks in style: 2541:Pedal Steel, Background ModernPopCountry Ev 110 RealDrums in style:NashvillePop16^1-a:Snare, Hihat , b:Snare, Ride
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David - good song! You need to hold on to the co-writer. I liked the melody and production, but the writing really stood out, "Cause she knows her Lord wore thorns for a crown Her eyes on the cross, her feet on the ground With a kind of love that always abounds A church girl can make your life whole So find you a girl who’s heaven bound" - fantastic. And true. I found one and I know for sure. Really good stuff!
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A good catchy chorus. Nice band and well constructed and written song.
Good stuff.
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Hot subject, really hot  Very very very catchy chorus, one I would like to sing aloud, but I think it's better just to hum it  "I just met your daughter" funny well chosen line. The band works nicely and the mix is good. The only thing that's missing is the church girl choir to complete the heavenly sound. Janne
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Hey David...I love church girls too...the two women in my life (my wife and daughter) are church girls...catchy lyrics and melody...sounds like you and Rachel have formed a formidable team...keep it up...we love listening!
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David.
great song idea...unique. a hoot.
when i was young ...me n' me mates used to chase church girls..(or was it the other way round on occasion...lol.)
good times when i sang in a church choir ages ago.
loved it..and lyrics.
happiness.
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Hahahahaha!  Ah, church girls love having a sinner around
So go ahead and let her save your soulCool lyric. Love it.
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Good song with great lyrics and a catchy chorus, I like it.
The drums are a bit too busy for my taste, but the song itself is pretty good.
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Man, you and Rachael work so well together. Are you guys doing your song-a-day thing next month? Nice to hear you sing of church girls in a better light than Billy Joel did. Man, you have a terrific selection of instruments to make this good song even better. Excellent melody and changes to bring it to an even higher level. You found yourself a real gem there, David, and I'm REALLY looking forward to be one of the reapers of that benefit. I didn't hear the choir until the last sustain --there was that much goodness going on.
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"And the preacher said
Hell can’t get any hotter
I said I don’t know preach
I just met your daughter"
HA!
Good one.
Good BAND.
Your usual emotive vocals!
More.
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Good work both of you. I enjoyed my listen.
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The band sounds good.The chord progression went to a couple of unexpected places, but that's a good thing when it works. And this does. Good lyrics. I think this partnership looks promising. Nice work to you both, Tom
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More like this, whadda-ya-say, Dave & Rachel ?
Last edited by edshaw; 01/21/23 04:59 AM.
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Your collaborator has edged you even closer to the lyrical danger zone: blurring the fine lines works for you musically too.
Good work.
Cheers
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Thanks Brad, Yeah Rachel and I are having fun and she is writing up a storm. Glad you liked it!
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Thanks Janne! Ah, go ahead and sing it loud. It might save your soul man!
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Thanks Dan, I am so glad you liked it! Yeah Church girls are the best aren't they??
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Thanks so much Muso!
I am glad you liked it!
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Well, I can't tell you on here what a drummer in one of my bands said about a "church girl", a preacher's daughter that he knew.... well, one civil word.... "hot".....her daddy would not have approved..... this is a family friendly forum.
Nice job.
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
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