David, I found the lyrics to be very emotional. Great job of matching the vocaloid to the song. Enjoyed the production. It's a nice listen. I liked the use of harmonies in this song. In many songs harmony is overused and too out front. You blended the harmony into the song in a very pleasing manner.
Jim Fogle - 2023 BiaB (1010) RB (Build 4) Ultra+ PAK
Cakewalk - Zoom MRS-8 recorder
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