Janne,
interesting tune. For some strange reason, it reminds me of Japanese alternative pop songs, probably because of claps on drums, which I feel was a great decision. Very good arrangement! Guitars and bass work very well on this. But why such a violent way to that special woman's heart ?
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P.S. I admire your bravery bending rhymes to your needs. Most of my life I lived in US, and still shaping some words and phrases are a great challenge for me. Mental block
Thanks Misha for your kind feedback
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I agree about the drums, I'm really glad I found that RD while re-arranging this tune.
I received feedback from a guy who said that this song sounds like it's about him and his feelings. So I guess that violent way is quite universal theme
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I like playing with words also outside lyrical landscapes so it feels natural to me play with words also with my songs. I'm flattered by your admiration
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Janne