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Take a Bow

A bit ridiculous, but a lot of fun to put together. So MAYBE it will be fun to listen to. If not...well, at least it's SHORT.

This song is dedicated to our fans. Both of them. We're forever grateful that we somehow managed to marry up. ("marry up" is a somewhat obscure term for being lucky enough to marry someone better than you deserve.)

Ha!

All the instruments are from the 2026 _MUCK.STY RealStyle. They are arranged in various combinations, and shots are used in the 2nd verse.

THANKS in advance for any listens and comments.

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File:Take A Bow.SGU
Key=G , Tempo 145, Length (m:s)=2:28
Style is _MUCK.STY (Muck Heavy Grunge)
RealTracks in style: 1008:Bass, Electric, ElecRock Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 691:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming AcRockBright Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 3734:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm GrungeRockSteady8thsPhaser Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 4163:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm RockNewWave80sSyncArpeggioClean Ev 120
RealDrums in Song:Grunge^4-a:Brushes, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat open
Guitar solo: PRS SE Zach Myers guitar, Spider V 30 amp

TAKE A BOW

We played on the stage
Bathed in the spotlight
Even made the front page
Hey, we’re sold out tonight

The mosh pit is full
The girls going wild
A human swimming pool
Hey, I think that one smiled

Shoot the stars above us
Shake the hands that shove us
All the fans that love us
Take a bow
Take a bow

We wrote all our songs
So we could keep control
And when they sang along
Well, it made us feel whole

The t-shirts were sold
With pictures of the band
And then we got too old
But, that’s not what we planned

Shoot the stars above us
Shake the hands that shove us
All the fans that love us
Take a bow
Take a bow

The limousine has like ten flavors of seltzer water
And a driver on bail for vehicular manslaughter
And enough headroom for all the Harlem Globetrotters


We play all the hits
Cuz that’s what they like
With our matching outfits
Hey, we all look alike

We play the encore
For better or worse
And if we’re keeping score
Hey, we coulda been (we coulda been) first

Shoot the stars...

Shoot the stars above us
Shake the hands that shove us
All the fans that love us
Take a bow
Take a bow
Take a bow
Take a bow

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Ron,

Wow! Very cool!

Love the fast pace and excellent arrangement. Great stop ending! Awesome vocal as usual. This was a fun one!

Count me in as one of your fans!

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Nice! Remained of the power pop of the end of the 1980s. Good vocals and production.

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Take a bowowowow....love it smile
I think the fun you had writing this song really comes across to the listener.
I love the driving tempo and the overall vibe, and I LOVE your prosody.
Unique in the best and most positive way.
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Hi Ron,

What a fun write!

"The limousine has like ten flavors of seltzer water
And a driver on bail for vehicular manslaughter"

Brilliant!

Excellent vocal, great job on the guitar solo too, you should play more often.

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Hi Ron,

An incredibly energetic song, with many tongue-twisting parts in the lyrics.
Very funnily done and well sung, nice melody!

For a moment I thought "take a bow" was meant for your president, but apparently not...

I did have to scratch my head for a moment at this lyric:
"The limousine has like ten flavors of seltzer water
And a driver on bail for vehicular manslaughter
And enough headroom for all the Harlem Globetrotters"

Couldn't get what it really meant, even after the translation in Dutch, but I'm pretty sure it was funny!

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It's a very catchy song that starts off strong. Bravo to the vocals, which are excellent, just like the song itself.
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Hi Ron!
I agree with Hans about the tongue twisters - I don’t know how you could do it - I’d be tripping over myself! Illustrates the frenetic pace of touring and the like?

Good guitar solo! Your exclamation point in your summary had me waiting with great anticipation and you didn’t disappoint.
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Hi, Ron.

Fun song - upbeat pop and nice write.

Catchy! Love everything about this. smile


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Originally Posted by rsdean
Ron,

Wow! Very cool!

Love the fast pace and excellent arrangement. Great stop ending! Awesome vocal as usual. This was a fun one!

Count me in as one of your fans!

Bob

Thanks, Bob! Yeah, the arrangement gets a little bonkers as it slides into the bridge/solo, but so are the lyrics, SO...glad it didn't lose you!

Welcome to the fan club! We're honored.


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Hey DC,

You are right.

This is a lot of fun!!

I had so much fun left listening it I could have listened to it longer but I guess it was almost the perfect length so you did really good man.

😁

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Catchy as can be with great vocals and production as usual. Yes, fun is the word I'd use to describe this tune. Well done again, you keep turning out great stuff with ease!


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Originally Posted by Brno
Nice! Remained of the power pop of the end of the 1980s. Good vocals and production.

Thank you, Arri! I'm pretty comfortable in the 80s for sure.

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Take a bowowowow....love it smile
I think the fun you had writing this song really comes across to the listener.
I love the driving tempo and the overall vibe, and I LOVE your prosody.
Unique in the best and most positive way.
Enjoyed my listens a lot smile[Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]

Thanks, B.D.! Think the "bowowow..." ending was taken from how as kids we used to imitate the echo of mic/PA reverb by repeating the last syllable. At any rate, it WAS a ton of fun. I always have to Google "prosody" to ensure I'm remembering all the elements. Got it now. THANKS again!


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Amazing Phrasing!
Some really clever and amusing lines in there.
Very well mixed, sung and produced.

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Yes Ron you should take a bow. This song is full of hilarious lyrics all of which was perfectly sung. How did you do that without breaking up?
Super driving track - brilliant
I really liked your arrangement and ending
Loved it


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Originally Posted by BlueAttitude
Hi Ron,

What a fun write!

"The limousine has like ten flavors of seltzer water
And a driver on bail for vehicular manslaughter"

Brilliant!

Excellent vocal, great job on the guitar solo too, you should play more often.

Thanks, Dave! Yeah, everything had to be over the top to sync with the lyrics, so the solo is a parody: An ascending arpeggio cliche over a modulation, a new progression, plenty of slides/bends and a return to the original key, all in 8 bars. Didn't think about it too hard and didn't play it too many times. Oh, and it's embarrassingly easy to play, too. But like the way it fit the song--glad you did, too!

Most of the songs we put out don't call for a guitar part by me, but I love it when one does. I play SO MUCH better than I sing. smile

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That's a good pop song. It was a fun listen


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Ah, i have a new motto: A bit ridiculous, but a lot of fun to put together. Man, you can't imagine how up i married.

Very cool write, Ron. Those lyrics are definitely not sing-alongs. What an excellent job of not only getting those words out, but also making them all very understandable. Really an incredible job. Hey, it is quite short --quick and short, but huge fun. Really well done.


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Brilliant driving rock song in all respects: instrumentation, arrangement, lyrics and vocals. I particular like this verse:

"The limousine has like ten flavors of seltzer water
And a driver on bail for vehicular manslaughter
And enough headroom for all the Harlem Globetrotters"
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Originally Posted by Birchwood
Hi Ron,

An incredibly energetic song, with many tongue-twisting parts in the lyrics.
Very funnily done and well sung, nice melody!

For a moment I thought "take a bow" was meant for your president, but apparently not...

I did have to scratch my head for a moment at this lyric:
"The limousine has like ten flavors of seltzer water
And a driver on bail for vehicular manslaughter
And enough headroom for all the Harlem Globetrotters"

Couldn't get what it really meant, even after the translation in Dutch, but I'm pretty sure it was funny!

Hans

Thank you, Hans!

So to break down the three lines of the bridge you were asking about into plain (but American) English:

1. The limousine has an amazing selection of mixers available in the built-in bar
2. The limousine driver has been criminally charged with killing someone with a car, presumably the limousine
3. The limousine has a raised roof tall enough to accommodate the tallest passengers, for example, The Harlem Globetrotters basketball team

Funny interpretation about our "take a bow" and our president, but...no.

Ha!


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