Thanks Dan, yes, people I'm showing it to keep asking: "You did this with WHAT programs??" I know a lot of people use Reaper etc... Melodyne works for me for now because it allows me to fix vocals, create harmonies, and change around the other BIAB realtrack instruments as well, then do a final mix adding reverb, EQ, etc there.

Sundance, thank you for your suggestion about an instrumental, you are exactly right. My next step, I think, is to get proper help for a vocal arrangement for those soldiers, with stronger chord support under, and then yes, thank you, a killer guitar solo as they march out would be perfect!

The thing I'm pleased about now is that I know I can generate a good solo in BIAB, and then pull it around in Melodyne, perhaps even having it approximate the chorus melody. I'm kind of excited about that, pulling the BIAB solo guitar line around the lead vocal for this track was a revelation to me... not rocket science, it just has to sound right. I wonder if it's too busy for some people's ears, if it distracts from the lead vocal at times?

Thanks for the great feedback, I'm seeking more as I create draft #2, and prep to demo with proper singers.