houston, we have lift-off and all engines are burning!

i like it dan. i agree with you that it's a beautiful song.

forgive me, but i think your vocal would benefit from melodyne or autotune, especially when you're reaching for those highs. you are both sharp and flat in several places and you seemed out of your comfortable range, vocally speaking. you may have better control if you dropped it 2 semitones. you are struggling with the song and it's obvious even with my ears. in summary, you have a nice, professional start. try dropping it a full step and see if you are more comfortable singing.

you have a nice voice, you simply need to work on your control and that will come with practice.

good work, my friend.