One way to add excitement to any piece of writing, whether it be a song or a novel is to use action words (usually ending in "ing") rather than past tense or passive words.

An example would be replacing "I stood" with "standing" or "I did" with "doing"

Those types of words can help add "animation" to the image and more life or excitement to the song.

You can use this even when describing a past situation by setting it up as a memory in the beginning of the song then treating the rest as a present, active situation.

Just a thought.
No wait,
Just thinking!

Carkins