Hi Phil. Love your voice. Sounds quite good actually.

I love the 'blue light flashing' line but not too keen on the repeated 'highway patrol pulling me over again'. IE it's maybe too much stating the obvious?

I'm not much of a lyricist myself but I'm pretty sure you might make this stronger with a different punch line or maybe even different punch lines for each verse?

You've got a great voice! and the mix sounds good.

Peace,

Ian

Last edited by Ian Ferrin; 04/18/13 02:46 AM.