Hi Patrick,
...listen again and gauge the impact of what I hear in light of your comments.
All the best,
Noel
Noel, I had to nitpick to find anything so don't put too much weight into my comment

. I neglected to mention how nicely the chorus lifted the song and that I enjoyed the song craft when you added "and traveling easy" to extend the end of the chorus. Oh, plus the positive outlook that so many of your songs convey. Regards,