Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Hi, Noel!

Very nice job on the "re-do". The production supported your lyric/vocal exactly as it should - stepping back a bit to allow the verse to "be about the message" and then swelling for the chorus to "shout out" the positive...(nice job on the strings!).

Your mix is excellent - every instrument clear and crisp and "a part of the whole".

You have a real knack for writing a combination of phrase and melody that leaves the listener singing parts to themself as they walk away...

I enjoyed my many listens (...that's gonna leave a mark!)

floyd



Hey floyd,

Thanks for giving the song a run through. In my mind, I can see Brenda smiling as she reads through what you've written.

If my melodies and lyrics are taking a turn for the memorable, then some of that credit belongs to you. I appreciate that you don't mind me using your songs as a springboard for my (self)education. By working my way through your lyrics, I iron out and organise the information that I've picked up over the years. Interestingly, I don't recall that information until I have something to apply it to. That's where the floyd jane songbook has been invaluable.

All the best,
Noel



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