I think what Russ is trying to say is that the lead vocal part is a one-note melody in many places.

I'm agreed, you might try to make the melody you sing a bit more interesting than that, if you can.

Other than that, keep on trackin', you've set a lofty goal. You should learn a lot along the way and your songwriting and recording skills should end up in a better place from the endeavors.


--Mac