Hi toucher,
I don't have the technical knowledge to tell you how to "mix" the mix, but I can hear that you are too far ahead in the mix. Perhaps you could use some slapback echo on your voice and reduce ever so slightly the volume, see how the mix goes from there. I would also increase the drums slightly (but by reducing your voice that may take care of that) just trying to help.

Regards
Michee


Windows 11 64 bit, Biab 2024 1111, Realband 2024
i7 Desktop Computer 16Gb Memory