It's a good start Michee, and the song and its sentiment are worth more work.
To do your song justice you need a better vocal with virtually no reverb (unlike the cavernous one you have at present) which would better convey the song's intimacy and personal nature. There are also some good tips above from the other guys, which will help you get where you want to be with this one.


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BIAB 2019
Cakewalk by BandLab
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