Hi Skyline, jford, silvertones, Ryszard & Robh,

Thank you all for your comments.

Remember this was my first attempt at a country song, and I will take all that you have advised on board.
I will attempt to re-write and hone (is that a word?) the song.

It was just a quick no-brainer that took about 20 minutes to write, so not a lot of thought went into it.
I just wrote what I felt.

I will re-post when I have given it more thought (hope that's within my lifetime )

Regards
Michee

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