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Hi all, Thank you for taking the time to help with the advice on this song.

Hervey Gerst, Can you explain in more detail about what you mean :
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"Finally, you don't really need two tags at the end. I'd get rid of the middle tag if it were my song"





Right now, you sing the "Ohh, I'm on my own" twice at the end of the song, followed by: "Ohh, I loved you so".

In the music business, the second time you sing "Ohh, I'm on my own" and the following "Ohh, I loved you so" are called "tags". I don't think you need that first repeat. Either don't do it, or else overdo it. Slowly fade out, singing over and over, "Ohh, I'm on my own", and just before the music disappears, add the last, "Ohh, I loved you so".

And bring up your vocal about 3 dB overall for the whole song.