Sounds good to me Robert!
A small arrangement thing - I really liked it when the drums came in at 0:56, it got things up and nicely underway. I'd have then left them in, all the way through, not going back to the sidesticks, which seem to slacken things off. Instead, to provide contrast when the next verse starts at 1:04, try some low strings or a pad. Toucher has a point about the keys, they're a tad light and an acoustic piano would maybe sound better.
A fine song though, and I enjoyed it.


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BIAB 2019
Cakewalk by BandLab
Studio One 4