Hey Paul,


I think the vocals here are great, and I love the mix.

I think it builds really well. I think the second verse and chorus flourishes and touches on the drums and guitar are really nice.

Wonderful job.

One observation, I think it takes too long for the vocals to come in at 46 seconds.

The ordinary listener may stumble across this on soundcloud and not listen because they think it is an instrumental.

Generally speaking, a song with vocals should have vocals start at 10 seconds (4 bar intro is standard) to attract more listeners.

Just a thought. Trying to be helpful.

Great performance and mix though.

David Snyder
Songwriter/Renaissance Man
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