Roger,

NIce work here. The vocal is stellar—from a production standpoint, I think the vocal can come a bit more forward. There are some “hot” spots in the tune, but for me more in the instrumental than the vocal, which sits quite nicely throughout—I would just feature that a tad more.

And, hey—Welcome to the BIAB Forum. Lots of great folks here. Looking forward to hearing more of your songs.

All the best,

Deej