Hi Noel. This is fantastic. I am most impressed with the phrasing.
The harmony in the last verse gave a sensational unexpected added dimension.
I really liked the rhyming style using on lines 3 and 6.
Moreover, how brilliant is this: "You could have been an angel Dressed in threads of rainbow"
Excellent, everywhere.
Trev
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