Hi Noel. This is fantastic. I am most impressed with the phrasing.
The harmony in the last verse gave a sensational unexpected added dimension.
I really liked the rhyming style using on lines 3 and 6.
Moreover, how brilliant is this:
"You could have been an angel
Dressed in threads of rainbow"
Excellent, everywhere.
Trev
I don't normally quote someone else's review, but Trev pretty much said exactly what I was thinking.
Excellent!