Originally Posted By: Ember - PG Music
The lyrics of this song were very relate-able. Thanks for taking the time to share it with us!


Thanks for listening, Ember.


Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
FJ & Janice,

Beautiful and powerful. Excellent vocals!! I've heard quite a few of your songs. Eyes closed, this will make it to top 10. Enjoyed it!
Thank you for sharing!

Misha.



Thanks, Misha!!


Originally Posted By: dcuny
Yep, this is a good one all right.

Maybe I'm overthinking things - I'm in a Noel sort of mood wink - but I noticed the verses rhymed "don't come easily" and "opportunity" with the "ee" sound. Clever rhyming, rolls of the tongue and feels natural.

But the last verse broke the "ee" rhyming pattern and instead used an inner rhyme line up behind.

I have a tendency to fill up space with lots of notes. It's good to hear the opposite done so well - a song that lingers over the notes, isn't rushed at all, holding the melody.

And, of course, sung with the patented "straight from the heart" floydjane delivery, with subtle support from Janice.

Plus, I'm a sucker for cellos! smile


David - thanks for the thoughtful review (again!). I always enjoy reading what you have to say about a song (and production)..

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