Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Robert,

I really liked this!

Excellent lyric. Nice melody. A story well told...

So many good lines:

"forever fixing broken things
she came upon a pair of wings
with blue sky scraps..."

"her waist cut
like the key to his lock..."

"you`ve seen enough
mirror says as much..."

"he has the watch she has time..."

...to mention a few.

Cool backing (had a similar thought to ray on the horns...)

fj




Floyd,
Thank you for quoting most of the lyrics! No really- its very supportive to know someone gets my scribbles.

Originally Posted By: Scott C
Loved this Robert. Super vocal. Excellent choice of instruments. Super clear mix as well. Well done


Thank you,Scott!

Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert

Very impressive. Thought the bass sounded really nice, well sung and composed.

As usual a strong lyric.

Nicely done.

Peter


Peter,
Love that bass RT;thanks for your listen and likes.

Robert