Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
Really great work here - very well composed and your vocals are tremendous here. It sounds ready for the radio too, and the instrumentation works with your voice perfectly.

Great job and thanks for sharing!


Thanks Deryk!

Originally Posted By: jannesan
Very nice poetic start: "forever fixing broken things
she came upon a pair of wings", sounding like an angel (and later 'a feather for a lost cause'), vivid images like a movie without speaking - small gestures build up the story.
Fretless bass, horn section, congas, excellent choices and excellent use. And I really enjoyed your vocals, fragile yet strong interpretation.

Janne




Janne,
That`s such an encouraging review- thank you!



Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
" man past his best before date, a younger woman: file under Ambiguous Love Song." smile

"cross the counter in the Dairy Queen
she wants to know how he`s been
you`ve seen enough
mirror says as much
to make believe in pure"

Powerful. As is the entire write.

That fretless bass and the congas add great dimension. Outstanding choice.

Your vocals add just the right amount of melancholy to the production.

The mix is spot on to our ears.

Excellent.

J&B

PS Regarding the mistake...Bud is too old.



J&B,

I appreciate all those positives... and will make allowances for another oldster!

Robert