Nice! smile

An alliterative opening verse, poetic language - it's a joy to listen to the lyrics.

The instrumentation is perfect for the song - dynamically flat and embellishing. In a way it's more poetic recitation than sung.

The only nit I was going to mention the ending was a bit MIDI-ish for my taste, but my son walked by at that point and without prompting said that he thought the MIDI in the sound was rather charming. So... Horses for courses. wink


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?