Frans,

First off, so glad you’re still writing and sharing music. Not sure where your musical capabilities are coming from, but given this engaging piece, I’m just gonna guess you have lost much on your fastball. The music and instrumental mix is really engaging; the vocal is sincere and emotional. From a technical production standpoint, I agree the vocal could be a little crisper in spots . . . but it falls well on the ear as is. Nicely done!!

All my best,

Deej