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"WITHIN" Is another of my originals (words and music). I used BIAB for all the backing tracks. Any feedback will be appreciated. Here is the link to "WITHIN" on my SOUNDCLOUD account. https://soundcloud.com/user-530363504/within-by-allan-judd?si=dbaf631c575b4f9eaaa7ea8721e5d9ee&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharingHere is the song summary from BIAB: Song summary for “WITHIN” Songwriter: Allan Judd ****** Song Summary ************* Title: WITHIN Style is _DIR_AMP.STY (Amplitube Dire Rhythm & Solo Ele) RealTracks in style: 521:Bass, Electric, Pop Syncopated Ev 136 RealTracks in style: ~524:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 165 RealTracks in song: ~524:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 165 RealTracks in song: 1682:Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 165 RealTracks in song: 1264:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopShiningA-B Ev 120 RealDrums [in Song: DrivingPop8ths^01-a: HiHat, Snare, b: Open Hat, Snare
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Good song, Allan, and i like the harmony. I'd like to hear the vocals a little more our front, but that's just an opinion. Good choice on the band, too.
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Thanks, Marty. That is really helpful. I'll probably do just that and move up the vocals.
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Nice tune - a bit of a Dire Straits vibe.
Liked the vocal and harmony - an engaging tune. Agree with Marty maybe bring the vocal up a bit (and maybe a touch of reverb?).
Good work.
Peter
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Morning Mr. Judd,
You've posted four songs but haven't commented, reviewed, dropped in to say hello on the works of others.
It's time to commune.
Cheers
rayc
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Cool song Allan,
Good band mix. your vocal may be, ever so slightly, too low in the mix.
You might look at dealing with sibilant sounds, (essing). It's not too bad but is there - a little bit of treatment goes a long way.
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Nice tune, I liked the "oh yeahs" in it. Yes, it sounded like Dire Straits. Good work on both performance and production.
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Hey there, fellow Virginian! Catchy tune with a lot of movement. Nice vocal and harmony.
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Hi, Allan.
Catchy write, nice instrumentation. Cool harmony.
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Nice song!! Very good job with the mix, and the vocals (nice harmonies!) are very good!! Well done!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks for the positive feedback, Greg. That always helps.
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