The hard panned guitars are, occasionally, too loud & they also drown the vocal.
This is very 70s prog pop...add more keys and it'd be Starcastle.
I can't hear much of what would've been Ian's original project.
BIG sound, big themes.
BIG.
Had to look up Starcastle, and I'm glad I did... Listened to "Fountains" & "Stargate".. Wow, reminded me of YES...
Yeah, I really did a number on Ian's original musical concept... he said he loved it, but in reality, he may have hated it... you just never know.
Thanks for band Tip, and the constructive feedback, Ray.
Wow! Great song. Well sung.
Such a richly textured production.
A+ for all elements.
Thank you for the ears, and words... I'll look forward to hearing your next production.